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Forgive the forgotten...
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Forgive the forgotten... |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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Forgive the forgotten for unworthy words Whose verses remain unrehearsed to this day Whose inspirited spirits evoked no applause Forgive them and live and believe in your way Remember outnumbered who stood for a cause Not destined to stand, they defended tomorrow They followed a hollow belief in their course Remember and live and honor their sorrow ------------------ I fell in love and kept on falling |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Beautiful work, as always... I had to read it a couple of times....But even though it is very eloquent...I don't understand...It seems to me like some of the lines have absolutely nothing to do qith each other...just random rhyming thoughts...could you elaborate a bit? ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Liked this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
EXCELLENT master, a most well thought out and crafted piece. Well done!! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
This was good. Took couple times to read it, but I like it. Lots of thought here!  |
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