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PoeticPreacher
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since 1999-10-20
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0 posted 1999-10-20 08:35 PM


Can Our Love Be Rekindled?

My soul has been naked
For so very long.
I put a distance between us.
I know I did you wrong.

In your night I was a thief
Telling lies between my teeth.
My mornings are no longer the same,
Can we rekindle love’s flame???

As long as my breath is in me,
I now know...I will always love you tenderly.
I know that you need time
And I will give you the necessary space.
Only extend to me a piece of your dear and loving grace.

I know it’s not that easy.
My frivolous ways have made you dizzy.
Don’t blame you if you don’t want to rekindle a love I delayed.
Betraying our love,
Will be the price I paid.

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PhaerieChild
Senior Member
since 1999-08-30
Posts 1787
Aloha, Oregon
1 posted 1999-10-20 08:42 PM


That's quite an apology!! Hope things work out.

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If you love me like music, I'll be your song.
~Heart~ Dreamboat Annie


Watcher666
Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

2 posted 1999-10-21 09:21 AM


Liked this much! Well done.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-21 07:02 PM


If this didn't work nothing will!

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Denise

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