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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-10-20 08:24 PM




We got caught in the wonder of all the colours
of our rainbow - glowing softly
blending together
you and I
we made the colours of our rainbow

When the sky clouds over
when the sun is golden
I'll be your rainbow now
ever changing - everlasting
just like you and I

But when the sky clouds over
and when the sun is going down
when the light is fading
will I still be your angel of light?
yes, whenever 'we' think of you and I!

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


© Copyright 1999 Cindy Jones - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 1999-10-20 09:07 PM


Very nice Rainbow
Balladeer
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2 posted 1999-10-20 11:14 PM


Ah, the brightness has returned!
Dark Angel
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3 posted 1999-10-21 02:13 AM


Lovely RainbowGirl

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



suthern
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4 posted 1999-10-21 06:46 AM


Good job, Brit!
Iloveit
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5 posted 1999-10-21 10:07 AM


well if your colors helped make a rainbow, then yours musta been the prettiest ones, cause you are special nice poem
Pepper
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6 posted 1999-10-21 10:11 AM


So lovely Rainbow......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Munda
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7 posted 1999-10-21 10:23 AM


Very lovely, Rainbow.
WhtDove
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8 posted 1999-10-21 10:38 AM


Well done! I can see those colors now.
Trynete
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9 posted 1999-10-23 11:03 AM


Whenever I see your name, and a post by you, I feel drawn to it, and I always, always have to read your poetry. There hasn't been a poem yet that I did not like by you. I love reading your poems, keep up the good work girl!!!
Michael
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10 posted 1999-10-23 11:06 AM


Beautiful poem, Rainbow. Indeed, we all make the colours of our rainbows.

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Michael Anderson

Is all that we see or seem
but a dream within a dream?



Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla
11 posted 1999-10-23 11:28 AM


RG,
Well done, the next time I see a rainbow I'll think of you.

Watcher666
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12 posted 1999-10-23 01:35 PM


Lovely! I Love rainbows.

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

RainbowGirl
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United Kingdom
13 posted 1999-10-23 05:31 PM


Thanks guys.. I actually saw a double rainbow today, absolutely beautiful..

HUGS all

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


JTF
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France
14 posted 1999-10-26 07:05 AM


It deserves to be on top again ...

HUSG

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Plaisir d'amour ne dure qu'un moment,
Chagrin d'amour dure toute la vie.

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