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RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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0 posted 1999-10-20 05:54 PM


Last night I had this incredible dream
I dreamt that you were here with me
As you looked into my eyes you softly whispered
I love you, now, always and forever
Gently, you kissed me and took my breath away
so quickly you were out of reach you'd begun to fade
I tried to catch you but I wasn't fast enough
And before I knew it, I had lost all your love
Suddenly, I awoke with tears in my eyes
Because I knew you never would be mine
Still, my dreams keep me wishing for you,
My mind playing tricks all my past coming true
Some may say I have a selfish kind of love
When yours is all I ever dream of.....

Thinking about the past and wondering about the future..
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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 10-20-1999).]

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Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
1 posted 1999-10-20 05:59 PM


So sad. So beautifully written.
.....More Hugs, my friend........

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

[This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 10-20-1999).]

Christopher
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since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-10-20 06:32 PM


RG!
Wake up!!!
You're living in the past!!!
Just kidding, sometimes those fond memories from days gone by sneak up on us and leave us wistful and melancholy!
But what a wonderful way to express it!

Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
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3 posted 1999-10-20 07:40 PM


Never stop dreaming, Rainbow. So much beauty and peacefulness lies there, my friend.
Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

4 posted 1999-10-21 09:16 AM


Beautiful verse.Well done!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
5 posted 1999-10-21 10:22 AM


Rainbow, we are nothing without our dreams, dream on, but don't live in the past, strive for the future of your dreams
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