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Lynn
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since 1999-09-20
Posts 316
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.

0 posted 1999-10-19 08:39 PM



....Empty with out you....


I am empty with out you!
I am alone!
I am hurt!

My life is empty with out you!
I have no goals now that
you have vanished.

My heart is empty with out you!
There are no feelings there,
for I have no one to feel
for.

My soul is empty with out you!
You drained it of your
your love, when you
walked out the door.

My eyes are empty with out you!
I can no longer gaze at
the beauty, which was
you.

My arms are empty with out you!
With no one to hold, my
arms are left bare.

My lungs are empty with out you!
For your sent is no longer
there, to be breathed in.

My nights are empty with out you!
A light no longer shines
to show me the way, as
I stand here, alone, in the
darkness.

I am empty with out you!
I am alone!
I am hurt!


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"I Believe we are divine by nature." -Jewel

Grace is the refinement of a soul over time. -Jewel

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Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-19 09:22 PM


This is good, Lynn. The sadness and lonliness speak through this.

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Denise

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