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far New Member
since 1999-10-19
Posts 1Canada |
Thoughts of you... Thinking that you love me too... have never seen you... but the feelings... with your thoughts in my mind... everytime i close my eyes... you appear and place my head on your lap... your hands playing with my hairs... i look in to your deep eyes... and enjoy your beautiful smile... with the star shining behind your petals... then i hear a sound... calming than the sound of silence... beautiful than songs of angels... like a bell rings in temple far away... you speak up and say... .................... i open my eyes but you're gone... leaving me here all alone.... ------------------ life's a ocean of fire which we have to swim through... [This message has been edited by far (edited 10-19-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
I like it very much, It is very wistful and a bit melancholy. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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