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Death Mask |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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The Death of Me A reclamation declaration beyond this burial place dug into the hillside of a life not lived perhaps visited like a shrine erected in monument of possibilities left ignored for pursuit of a memory only wished upon and now embalmed… entombed to preserve the shell of a long hoped for existence… a search.. a yearning… yes- a dream now dead. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very fine piece. I enjoyed reading this one. ------------------ Denise |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Thanks Denise...this "came" to me today and is very important to my life at this time. Thank you. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Mystic Essence Junior Member
since 1999-09-29
Posts 28 |
Excellent work, I must say. I am impressed by your talents. ------------------ My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~ |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Nicely done!  ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
thanks to all of you...I just write what comes to me... RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A bump back to the top for this fine piece ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
yes,fine it is Robert......enjoyed this piece alot..... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
....and you do express your thoughts well, Robert.. |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
thank you Nan....I think too much?? NAH!!! RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Lost Dreamer Member Elite
since 1999-06-20
Posts 2464Somewhere near the Rainbow |
If you think to much, it's a blessing for all of us here. Your thoughts are well put together. |
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