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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 1999-10-18 08:32 AM


Me,
You,
"WE"
No more.

Heaven,
Bliss,
"GONE"
Slammed door.

© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
caroline
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since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218
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1 posted 1999-10-18 01:50 PM


My life in ten words, Kitty. The brevity adds to the intensity of your poem. It is excellent.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-10-18 03:38 PM


Ten words, not a wasted one and in them a lifetime spoken
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-18 08:28 PM


I like this!

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Denise

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
4 posted 1999-10-18 08:43 PM


very few words that speak volumes.....Well done kitty!

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

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