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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
When my time comes this earth to part, ...and leave what we call life, Remember me not as a man, ...but as a man and wife, For what I was has ceased to be, ...the day I said I do, My life exists in partnership, ...a whole made up of two, So when I die, I hope they etch, ...upon grave's monument, "A Husband and a Father Dear, ...We Have to Heaven Sent." |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Mike, what lovely sentiments! You are blessed! And so are the wife and kids!  ------------------ Denise |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
It takes a true man to write this. Well done. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Simply lovely....darn it you make my eyes fill up!  |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Splendiferous... |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It sounds as if both you and your wife had hit the jackpot of life. Long may you both live! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is a lovely poem Mike, you should repost it to the Two Challange I think.  In the dew of little things, the heart finds its morning and is refreshed. (ee cummings) |
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Gentleman Charles New Member
since 2000-01-30
Posts 4 |
Your "music" flows sweetly, in the virtue of one, the lady and the gentleman. The fragrance transcends bouquet! Excellent |
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