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Open Poetry #3

Starfish worries

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

0 posted 1999-10-16 09:45 PM

I couldn't forget you
even if I tried
you'll never fade in
my memory or my heart

You don't have to fight
to hold on to something
that is so completely yours
I want to be with you always
and never say good bye..

You are in my heart forever
nothing will ever change that

don't ever worry
not ever
We will have so many
wonderful days to spend
and dream about
and look back on

you'll see

have faith little starfish..

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-10-16 10:16 PM

Very sweet!

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Denise

JennyLee
Senior Member

since 1999-09-01

Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.

2 posted 1999-10-16 10:20 PM

Very well done.
Sweet verse

Jenny

redwriter1
Member

since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

3 posted 1999-10-17 09:59 AM

thank you. Not much form, I know but sometimes things come out that way. (smile)

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

4 posted 1999-10-17 10:22 AM

A very sweet poem. I must say, the title drew me in, and I had no idea what to expect. Great job.

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