Open Poetry #3 |
love |
redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
If but love could be as sweet as it's promise I will forever wonder which is true the hope and faith that love exists or the real thing or is it the hope and faith the make us belive and hence make love a real thing? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Good question Red... HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
As said before .....good question. Nice piece though. Kind of direct and forward...no sugar coating. I enjoyed it. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Thought provoking piece.Liked this one much. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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redwriter1 Member
since 1999-07-22
Posts 480Franklin, TN |
WHAT? No answers? Speculations? (smile) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
...hmmmm...could be! I dunno! Great poem,though! ------------------ Denise |
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