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As I Stand Alone |
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wannabe_poet Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36Markham, Ontario, Canada |
I sit here and wonder why you left me standing alone The days go by so ever slow As I sit here and cry And wonder why? Why you left me standing all alone? You have abandoned me, not once but many times before. And yet I still shed a tear Maybe it is a fear.... A fear that I know it is time to let you go, To spread your wings and soar. Fly away my love, As I stand alone I hold you close to my heart Knowing that it is best we had to part. ------------------ A.Z. Oct. 15/99 [This message has been edited by wannabe_poet (edited 10-15-1999).] [This message has been edited by wannabe_poet (edited 10-15-1999).] |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I can feel the sorrow in this piece. If this is something you have experienced I am sorry. I know where you stand and have felt what you discribe here. Letting go is best in a situation like this, even if it is the hardest thing for us to do. You brought the feelings across very nicely. |
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wannabe_poet Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36Markham, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you marilyn for your feedback! Yes this is something that I have and maybe still am going through... Somehow writing down how you feel is somewhat soothing and can make a nice poem!  ------------------ A.Z. |
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Deverone Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 136San Antonio, Tx, USA |
I felt as if you had taken the thoughts from my mind and put them onto the paper for me. Going through this kind of thing is always hard. At least you have tapped into the notion that writing it down is helping to understand it a little better. Good luck. If you need anything, my helping hand is always there. ------------------ Deverone "We are cups, constantly and quietly being filled. The trick is, knowing how to tip ourselves over and let the beautiful stuff out". ----Ray Bradbury--- |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
So sad.Good luck to you Dear Poet.Well done piece. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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wannabe_poet Junior Member
since 1999-10-15
Posts 36Markham, Ontario, Canada |
Thank you Deverone, how sweet of you! And thank you Watcher666... I need all the luck I can get! lol  |
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