Open Poetry #3 |
Golden Love |
Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Gazing into your soulful eyes Deepest brown, never telling lies Cooper blonde shining hair Oh my love your beauty fair Body, sleek and curved just right As you climb up on my lap tonight Nuzzle my neck as only you can do Where in the world did I find you? A kiss to my check, a nip on my arm You know no one will do you harm I protect you as you protect me Only I can see the heart of thee Gentle and loving and everything fine You are now and always will be mine When at night to bed we go You rest your head on my pillow Although they call you box of rocks I know you're as sly as a fox Here you sit quietly at my feet Comforting me with your body heat What luck star was with me that day? When I saw you and decided you should stay I say, "stay back wicked deceiver!" Seamus is my Golden Retriever! Just to note Seamus is my golden,100lbs on pure love and energy. And true to his breed he's ever under foot! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Poor baby, can't even teeth on jammies to ease his poor misunderstood self. Seamus is a good puppy and very affectionate. ------------------ Nothing is worse than sorrow, except perhaps disdain. I'll be myself tomorrow, tonight I'll feel the pain. DreamEvil© |
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EnglishRose Junior Member
since 1999-10-08
Posts 13 |
this is real cute,and true ------------------ "A Rose by any other name..." |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
hehe. Box of rocks! Haven't heard that one in a while. I love it! |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Oh, this one caught me off guard, and gave me a good chuckle. Thanks, Watcher ... looking forward to more. Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Isn't love grand? and man's best friend will never betray you. I enjoyed this. |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
LOL...so true...can't wait to read more!! Jenny |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
AHHHHHH Watcher, I thought you were speaking of your love of a woman..(she would be lucky) but it turned out to be a retriever. This was good...I LIKE!!! ;-) What's to be will be. You can not fight your destiny! ------------------ Kitty** |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Aren't dogs grand? I'd have a hundred if I could manage it Well, ok, 99. Nice poem for your doggie! ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
I liked this! Nice little twist there! Love those dogs, they truly are the most unconditional when it comes to love. I have a border collie/blue heeler. She's my baby! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Aren't they grand?? Undying love for so little |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Thank-You all for reading this. Dream, you know him too well! Rose,obnoxious yes he is,but yes cute too! Balladeer, I've always called him the dumb as a box of rocks puppy.But a more loving soul you'll never find. Nocht,Jenny,Kitty,Martie,Caroling WhtDove and Hoot....he's one of 6 dogs in my house.But shhhh....I haven't told them there dogs yet!They think they hairy children! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this lots!!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
I thought my Snoops had deserted me for a moment but his paw still remains on my foot...loved the sentiment.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellently done, Watcher! Dogs can teach us alot about unconditional love! They're super! Wouldn't trade my dog or cat either for that matter for all the money in the world! ------------------ Denise |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute write |
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