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Kitty**
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since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA

0 posted 1999-10-15 02:59 PM



How well did you know me?
What do I like to do?
Do you know that I love to dance,
and writing poetry too?
Do you know I love to fish,
and how much I like to swim?
Do you know I'm like a little girl,
and like to do things on a whim?
How much do I weigh?
What color are my eyes?
What's my favorite food?
Do you know it's chocolate pies?
Do you know I have small feet,
and there's a tiny mark upon one breast?
Where do I go when I feel sad,
or I'm just not feeling my best?

I'm here to say it babe,
But you didn't know me at all.
You didn't know what makes me happy,
or what makes me climb the walls.
You didn't know anything about me,
or even how I feel inside.
You didn't know about all the nights,
lying beside you that I cried.
I don't mean to sound bitter,
but I can't waste any more years.
I want someone that knows me,
and will help me to dry my tears.
That's why I'm no longer there.
You simply did not know your wife.
I'm sorry for you, but it's all over now.
I have found a better life.

© Copyright 1999 Kitty Sandridge - All Rights Reserved
U K Hero
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since 1999-08-08
Posts 266
England
1 posted 1999-10-15 03:18 PM


are you writing from Personal experience?
It matters not, its still very good.

Kitty**
Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428
Charlottesville,VA USA
2 posted 1999-10-15 03:33 PM


U K Hero..Yep..This is really the way it was,
as of a year and a half ago. I have found a better life and I believe he has too.
Thanks for the reply!

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

3 posted 1999-10-15 07:50 PM


Good for you!!Well done verse!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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4 posted 2004-05-04 03:30 AM



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