How I Want To Be Remembered

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Open Poetry #3

How I Want To Be Remembered

Lucie
Senior Member

since 1999-06-20

Posts 1077
Houston

0 posted 1999-10-15 02:25 PM

When I am dead and gone
and my life has ceased to be.
You can miss me if you want,
but don’t you bury me.

Cremate me, you heard me right.
Burn me up and place my ash (hehe)
In a place I can always see.
Within an hour glass.

Put me on the mantel
flip me only from 8 to 5.
Cause I’m not working any harder
then when I was alive.

Ohme
Senior Member

since 1999-07-17

Posts 816
Texas

1 posted 1999-10-15 02:31 PM

Lucie, this is so precious. I love it.

Ohme

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-15 02:38 PM

This was really cute.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 1999-10-15 04:04 PM

ROFL.... I love this, Lucie!

LngJhnAg
Member Elite

since 1999-07-23

Posts 3508
Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion

4 posted 1999-10-15 04:32 PM

Lucie

This is terrific! I love that last stanza.

caroline
Senior Member

since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm

5 posted 1999-10-15 07:17 PM

Lucie I see you are still rockin' girlfriend! This is great

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

freespiritfem
Junior Member

since 1999-10-07

Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA

6 posted 1999-10-15 11:03 PM

Very cute and witty....enjoyed it!!

HUGGS!!!

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Paula Diane S.

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

7 posted 1999-10-16 07:09 PM

Adorable! I loved this!

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Denise

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