Open Poetry #3 |
Giggles and wiggles |
Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Giggles and wiggles There are few words that can explain, Our passioned feelings or the pain, Of childish screams and giggled streams, That bounce the walls and hang from beams. There are few words that can encode The mode that little feet unload. The cognisance of joy and fears, That pour upon our heart and ears. They fill us full of little thrills That edge our mettle and give us chills. Their breakthrough of each tiny dare, Their learning of each how and where. And it takes us back to a time, Our lifetime a similar mime. Pinching all our nerves each giggle, Squiggling our hearts a wiggle. They cannot know their little fuss. Are our lives, relived for us. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I like this, Seymour! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This encompasses our childhood, our kids, and our grandkids - quite an enjoyable, amusing read - it liked me much! Thanks, Sy! |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Very well done, Seymour. Good message, and I love the way it's portrayed. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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Mona Lisa Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 100Halifax, Nova Scotia |
Well done. I like the concept and rythm of this poem. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'm giggling, SY. |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
I very much liked what you said and did with this....very cool!! Bridgette ------------------ "It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart." |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Enjoyed this much! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
To all my friends above I offer you some wiggles and giggles and a big thank you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Adorable and oh so true! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Denise, And a big wiggle for you. *L* |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Seymour I just LOVE this!! Very well done ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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