Open Poetry #3 |
Random Thought (sonnet) |
Soleil Member
since 1999-06-12
Posts 113 |
The passing stranger stands before first light He smiles with warmth, the wind outside blows strong. He takes one path, neither to left or right With commitment to a day twelve hours long. The short but lasting impression he gives Stays during a succeeding two-hour drive. In my silent, pensive thoughts he now lives Drifting like a cloud, gone with a sigh. Were there more such kind strangers to be found And cobalt blue would flush the sky with gold I would then drive out the chance crying sound Of whispers past trying that now enfold. At six in the morning my soul did find An offer that one stranger left behind. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Soleil, this is absolutely, positively, without a doubt - beautiful! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Your work always brings me a sunshiny smile... |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Love this Soleil ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Magical.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Fabulous! ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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