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Soleil
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since 1999-06-12
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0 posted 1999-10-14 08:00 PM


The passing stranger stands before first light
He smiles with warmth, the wind outside blows strong.
He takes one path, neither to left or right
With commitment to a day twelve hours long.

The short but lasting impression he gives
Stays during a succeeding two-hour drive.
In my silent, pensive thoughts he now lives
Drifting like a cloud, gone with a sigh.

Were there more such kind strangers to be found
And cobalt blue would flush the sky with gold
I would then drive out the chance crying sound
Of whispers past trying that now enfold.

At six in the morning my soul did find
An offer that one stranger left behind.

© Copyright 1999 Soleil - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-10-14 08:20 PM


Soleil, this is absolutely, positively, without a doubt - beautiful!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
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2 posted 1999-10-14 09:13 PM


Beautiful
Nan
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3 posted 1999-10-15 09:32 PM


Your work always brings me a sunshiny smile...

caroline
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4 posted 1999-10-15 09:41 PM


Love this Soleil

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats


RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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5 posted 1999-10-16 01:16 AM


Magical..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
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6 posted 1999-10-16 06:28 AM


Fabulous!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

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