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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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It would be so easy to say "He hurt me so... She's being mean!" But I'm on "outs" with more than one And thus a pattern must be seen. I can't say that it did not hurt To learn I am a lousy friend. I'd rather blame them for my pain But I can no longer pretend. Though I believe I'm in the right Perhaps it's not the "he" or "she" As much as I hate to admit I think the problem lies with me! |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Hi there, Belle. This is an interesting poem, and it reminds of days of yore on another board with other people. But never with you. |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
REally well done sweets...I don't know diddly bout math and I still liked it?.... |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Drinking coffee, warm and snug Suthern: here's a special HUG Don't be too late for work..  HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LJA: I'm definitely a doghouse resident to some of those! LOL. But I can live with that "disgrace." *EG* Thanks, sailor... Toerag: Thanks, sweetie... liking it is all I ask... *G* No math test today! LOL. RG: Even late, I was one of the first ones here! *G* (But I still haven't had my coffee! *G*) |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
ok Auntie, if liking it is all you ask, then Frog likes it as well ... SMOOCH [This message has been edited by JTF (edited 09-30-1999).] |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
great poem, to be able to look inside and say, maybe, just maybe I need some reworking, is a good quality, one I appreciate in a friend, who wants a friend who is always right? one who can give and take is just perfect [This message has been edited by Iloveit (edited 09-30-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Froggie: I saw those licks!! LOL. Lovey: Amen! *G* (Not that anyone will get an always right friend in me! LOL) Thanks to both of you! |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
wonderful work suthern.........to search ones soul is very hard and to admit ones wrongs is even harder.......I love your work......... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Suthern, this is a great poem, well done! ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
So well said. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Pepper, Dark Angel & UK Hero: Thank you all very much! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Suthern it is well done! I ditto Pepper up there. It is hard to look inside. But we love ya just the way you are! |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
*grumbles* Why is it that poeple here always make me want to fix myself? lol good poem ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This little keeper will fit well in my wallet. Words to take out and review from time to time. suthern, I am missing you. Alison |
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