Open Poetry #3 |
I Cry Alone (so there, WhtDove! LOL) |
suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How I wish there was someone To care about my tears. But alone I am and I alone Must face life and its fears. I feel much pain when my friends hurt They, in turn, hurt for me. But limitations are inherent In long distance sympathy. I can't wrap them in my hugs Or ease their aching heart. I can only send my love As I wish we weren't apart. And my cats offer company But tears they cannot dry. If there were arms to hold me close Perhaps I would not cry. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, You get a hug from me. Beautiful poem well done. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Hugs sent your way Suthern Enjoyed your poem ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Suthern: Wet soppy HUSG from me as well ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
well you get 4 or 5 hugs from me, and a well done! and there's one nice thing about long distance hugs, its that the person can't squirm out of them, you just hit them with one(or five lol) and that's that |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you, Seymour and Pepper... very much!!! Your hugs and comments are both appreciated! Soppy????? And Lovey claims I can't squirm out of them??? Oh, geesh! Send a cybertowel! *G* Thanks, RG and Lovey... love ya both! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Suthern, you are never alone girl...although we can't give you physical hugs, we can give you support and cyber hugs from here. Hugs Ruth |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Hugs from the other side of the ocean too , Suthern, and a little smile ! : ) I loved what you wrote and have a feeling you loved the challenge. : ) |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh yes...I do so well know the feelings in this poem. I have a cyber family and I wish I could have them all close, even just for a small piece of time. Then the warmth of the hugs can be felt when they are extended. Well done suthern. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Hoot: Believe me, that support and those cyberhugs mean a lot! *S* Munda: Thank you! And yes... I did! *G* I don't often try to answer the challenges, because my first response is always "I can't." It's a pleasant surprise to realize I can! *G* Marilyn: Amen!!! *S* Thank you! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Suthern I'm sorry I missed this while upfront. I have just been busy! I love this poem! I hate to admit, but I'm with ya on this one dear. As far as crying goes, I usually do it alone. So here's a (((BIG HUG))) from me! Even though it's only a cyber one! |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Here's more hugs!!! ((((((((HUGS)))))))) !!! ------------------ Denise |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
WhtDove: I understand that! LOL. I don't these women who can cry and still be pretty... I'm one ugly soul when I've turned on the waterworks... alone is probably better! *G* Glad you liked the poem! dsnyder: Thank you very much! [This message has been edited by suthern (edited 10-15-1999).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Well done gal! I'm out trying to find a bottle of good scotch now..Can't believe I missed this? And now that I've found it, I'm gonna be late!!! |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
Very lovely poem Suthern. I enjoy reading your work. |
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Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Beautifully done, Suthern ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Toerag: Why, thank you, sweets!!!! Ya gonna share that scotch? Or do I have to cry? LOL Dolphins3: Welcome! And thanks to you and Michael for your kind comments! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Suthern, you would always get a big hug from me. Just because that meanie Toe won't give you the attention you so desperately crave and deserve, please know that I would always put my arms around you (after checking both hands for sharp objects that could inflict bodily harm on me) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thanks, 'Deer one... it warms my heart and comforts me in the night to know you see me as such a desperate woman... your sympathy brings a tear to my eye and a lump to my throat... Here, gimme a hug... this hat pin should do wonders for perking up your afternoon... and watch for swiftly lifted knees! LOL |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Yanno Suthern?...I think Balladeer probably means that from his heart....As much as I hate to admit it..I'll bet he's a pretty nice guy...ya think?..... |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
**sniffles** What a heartfelt piece of writing ... this touched me ... Nocht ------------------ "Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus" (Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.") |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
I've found your never alone here.*Hugs* to you! Well done poem. ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Thank you very much, Nocht and Watcher! And Toe... that 'Deer one is indeed a nice guy... and if he doesn't know how fond of him I am, he hasn't been paying attention! LOL |
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freespiritfem Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49Cordova,Alabama,USA |
I felt as if you know my soul and my feelings...i'm fairly new here, but this place is very loving,warm.and sincere...i really enjoyed this very much,i'm in a long distance...We'll i wouldnt call it an affair..hehehe...and i feel so alone sometimes....but cyberhuggs are some of the best.....So to you Suthern...i send you this...BIG_O_HUGE_GIGANTIC_HUGG from one southern to another!!!! ------------------ Paula Diane S. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Suthern I know what you mean, my eyes get swollen and I don't want to go in public. LOL... |
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JTF Member
since 1999-08-09
Posts 319France |
Great one Auntie ! ... Here's your first SMOOCH ! ... and being a cyber one that won't give you my flu [This message has been edited by JTF (edited 10-16-1999).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
freespiritfern: I'm glad you enjoyed... and thanks for the hug! *S* WhtDove: But... but...but... that describes me most of the time! LOL Ya mean I should stay home? *G* JTF: Thanks, froggie! And thanks for the vote that cyber smooches don't transmit germs! LOL. (Hear that, Toe? *G*) |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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