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Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

0 posted 1999-10-14 08:00 AM

With passion born of words alone,
A kindled bond's aforesaid rare.
When love from inside out has grown,

Erotic nuance ne'er outshone.
Clandestine musings freely share,
With passion born of words alone.

Allure endued as pheromone,
In spirit lustful hearts declare
When love from inside out has grown.

With bated breath a bond has sown
Intrinsic trust beyond compare
With passion born of words alone.

True intimacy's surely known.
No greater love ~ No small affair
When love from inside out has grown.

An ecstasy as yet unknown
Enjoins a once unseemly pair
With passion born of words alone,
When love from inside out has grown.

Mike
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since 1999-06-19

Posts 2462

1 posted 1999-10-14 08:29 AM

From forth thy lips flow the songs of Erato.

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

2 posted 1999-10-14 08:52 AM

Nan,
A very touching lesson, enjoyable read and wonderful construction. Thank you *L*

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-14 09:08 AM

Excellent...but you knew that

IsabelleSkye
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since 1999-06-27

Posts 253

4 posted 1999-10-14 09:16 AM

Wow! Isn't love like that rare? It is indeed a gift Nan m'dear! Very beautiful poem! (Eyeing your meter jealously LOL)

*hugs*
Izzzzzzzzy

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Every man has in himself a continent of undiscovered character. Happy is he who acts Columbus to his own soul.......J. Stevens

doreen peri
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since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 1999-10-14 09:17 AM

What's a pheromone? Guess I'll have to look it up, huh? (There's one in every class, she thinks) hehehe

Fabulous, Nan! Love it!!

Some of the lines, are especially effective... "Erotic nuance ne'er outshone", "Intrinsic trust beyond compare", "An ecstasy as yet unknown".

Excellent!

Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02

Posts 1121
NM

6 posted 1999-10-14 09:50 AM

yep, you captured it perfectly...really wonderful

nan, just wanted to add here, cause the poetry workshop is not available, that I am really enjoying all the poems from your class, they are all great

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Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 1999-10-14 07:01 PM

Thanks everyone....
Who wants to do the pantoum now???

Denise

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since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 1999-10-14 07:10 PM

As usual, Nan, perfection! And love those little 'kisses'!

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Dr.Moose1
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since 1999-09-05

Posts 3448
Bewilderment , USA

9 posted 1999-10-15 10:18 PM

To convey what must be said , or dump what's in your head . Which-ever way you do it ,
your talent will improve it.

freespiritfem
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since 1999-10-07

Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA

10 posted 1999-10-15 10:26 PM

Nan...this was very heartfelt...i loved it!!! Ihave really learnd alot being in here...thank you...you are a GREAT_TEACHER!!!

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Paula Diane S.

freespiritfem
Junior Member

since 1999-10-07

Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA

11 posted 1999-10-15 10:30 PM

Nan...this was very heartfelt...i
loved it!!! I am learning a lot by
being in here...thank you...you are
a GREAT_TEACHER!!!

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Paula Diane S.

RobertB
Senior Member

since 1999-09-26

Posts 1104
Champaign, IL

12 posted 1999-10-15 10:49 PM

Bravo Nan!!! Bravo!!! Please don't come to close...I have pheromones oooooozing out all over me!!!! hehehehe

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

13 posted 1999-10-16 06:08 AM

I'm in awe of your talent Dear Lady! Excellent!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Alicat
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since 1999-05-23

Posts 4094
Coastal Texas

14 posted 1999-10-16 05:19 PM

Nan, as usual, beautiful. A rare and wonderful talent do you have SexiNess