I share your cry! (challenge from Dreamevil re:to Whtdoves')

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I share your cry! (challenge from Dreamevil re:to Whtdoves')

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 1999-10-14 01:57 AM

Oh, sweetie, I feel your heart is hurting,
Your eyes tell me of your pain,

Come let me hold you,
Let me kiss your worries away,

Let me cry with you,
let me make you laugh,

Honey, my dearest,
I am here for you,

I share your pain,
Your burden,
I am your shelter in the rain.

Let me be your shoulder to cry on,
Your friend to lean on,

I will wrap you in my arms of love,
I will comfort you,

I am beside you,
to guide you,

Let me take your mind,
a thousand miles away ,

I will laugh,
when you laugh,

Cry when you cry,

For I am you,
and you are I,

We are one,
I share every tear that falls from your eye.

Let me catch the tears
that you cry,

I will put them in a bottle,
to send miles away,

So my love,
You will never hurt again,
on a day like today!

Whatever your need,
I am here!

Relase all that pain,
in all your tears.

Don't be ashamed,
a man is more,

When he is real,
and tears fall to the floor.

I see a true heart,
one full of emotion,

A true man you are,
As your tears fall,
like waves of the ocean.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 1999-10-14 02:24 AM

Dreamevil asked us women to the same challenge whtdove asked the men..so this is my reply!hehe...

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

2 posted 1999-10-14 02:53 AM

Sweet.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

3 posted 1999-10-14 08:59 AM

Nicely spoken

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 1999-10-14 10:48 AM

Well done. I know how I feel inside about comfort it's just putting into words. Guess I will have to think on this one!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

5 posted 1999-10-14 05:38 PM

Whtdove you have started something!hehe
thanks for the reply,you too hoot, and Chris

Pepper
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since 1999-08-19

Posts 3079
Southern Florida

6 posted 1999-10-14 05:43 PM

Well done. I liked this much RH.

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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since 1999-09-23

Posts 727
Wisconsin

7 posted 1999-10-14 06:49 PM

Challenge well met, my dear

This is a beautiful piece indeed. Very well done.

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Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

8 posted 1999-10-14 07:14 PM

Very sweet and heartfelt!

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Denise

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31

Posts 3023
United Kingdom

9 posted 1999-10-15 03:30 AM

I like the idea of putting tears in a bottle..

HUGS

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