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Open Poetry #3

Dark Hours

Moonlight
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

0 posted 1999-10-13 09:24 PM

Glassy eyes stare back at me
From the bathroom mirror
It's 8am and the night was restless.
My body is still exhausted
From the night my mind did not rest.
Glassy eyes stare back at me
The warmth still trapped
Behind the heart and mind
Of an unnoticed soul.
So I close my eyes to the day
To walk through the dark hours
In the light of my mind.

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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-10-14 08:35 AM

Nice finish to this one

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 1999-10-18 09:51 PM

Well done, Moonlight, I enjoyed this!

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Denise

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

3 posted 1999-10-19 01:30 AM

Hey - like this! Excellent contrasting images in the last two lines.

Serraley
Junior Member

since 1999-10-09

Posts 11
New Zealand

4 posted 1999-10-21 05:56 AM

What a fantastic ending!

Watcher666
Senior Member

since 1999-10-13

Posts 1606

5 posted 1999-10-21 09:48 AM

Good read...liked this!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

Moonlight
Member

since 1999-06-25

Posts 105
Auburn, Alabama USA

6 posted 1999-10-21 04:29 PM

thanks everybody! i got a better response to this one than I thought I would...

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