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Bald Hill |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095
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"Bald Hill" Where am I, On this deserted cliff edge Where the night's not clear, yet, very clear Taking in the beauty, I rest upon the sand wedge Feeling bizzare, but surprisingly not feeling any fear A breeze caresses my face as it blows The night air calm with a sense of magic The mystic moon overwhelms me as it glows Not to have experienced this would be so tragic The dark clouds forming such beautiful figures Finally breaking and passing slowly by the moon In awe as I watch such a sight, my mind it triggers This night, this sky, this moment, a time most opportune This place, an eerie feeling about the night As she shines brightly upon calm waters below La Luna, Oh how she beckons me to take full flight As I am seduced, by her surrounding halo of golden glow Excitement takes over as I feel a sudden chill I want to visit here again, this place they call, Bald Hill. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
My dear, the formatting alone you worked wonders with. I have seen that same moon from many places. She is indeed lovely. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Dark Angel this is gorgeous! Well-crafted and beautifully written.  ------------------ The only man worth your tears will never make you cry... |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Soul-Brother, thank you so much for your lovley comment, And thanks for the advice, much appreciated ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Caroline, thank you so much for your lovley comment ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Enchanting D.A! Very well done, felt as if I was there! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
WhtDove, thank you Hon, I appreciate your comment ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
A very nice read....wonderful imagery in this piece. I loved these lines: "La Luna, Oh how she beckons me to take full flight As I am seduced, by her surrounding halo of golden glow" ------------------ It is better to be silent and be considered a fool, than to speak and remove all doubt. |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
I like this one...I could feel everything you were saying. Nice! |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Hoot, Thank you for your lovley comment, I appreciate it -------------- Pufalove, Thanking you muchly for your lovley comment ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Moonshine Member
since 1999-10-01
Posts 265Australia |
Great poem DA, was beautiful - I really felt like I was there. I can just imagine the moonshine on the water. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
thanks for taking me to such a beautiful place DA........ ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
I can almost feel the breeze....lovely poem! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Moonshine,I'm sure you can, it was breathtaking Thanks for your lovley comment.------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge [This message has been edited by Dark Angel (edited 10-02-1999).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Pepper, anytime !! thanks for your lovely comment.------------- Dragoness, thanks so much ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely enchanting piece! ------------------ Denise |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
A lovely poem DA! I needed this quiet, dark time on Bald Hill. Thank you. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Denise, thanks so much for your lovely comment  ------------- PDV,Thanks so much and you are most welcome ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Angel, You sang well the song of the moon |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Dark Angel, I love the imagery...you have done well here my dear!! Jenny |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Seymour and JennyLee, thanks so much, your comments always mean so much. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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