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ddog069 New Member
since 1999-10-12
Posts 2Crossville,TN,United States of America |
Once upon a time there was a leprechaun who was looking for his gold he looked up and down the rainbows,but all he found was mold.He was furious,but mostly curious.He was wanting to jump and shout,but all he did was pout.He cried and cried for hours.Then he started thinking if i'm going to get my gold back I need to call Justin cause he has magical powers.He made a wish and my gold appeared before my eyes. ------------------ Donald Monday |
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ddog069 New Member
since 1999-10-12
Posts 2Crossville,TN,United States of America |
I loved your poem will you write all you know about them?? ------------------ Donald Monday |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
cute Donald....thanks for sharing.... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Richard 33 Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187glen easton, wv usa |
I had a problem like that once, and I called the orkin man, after that everything was just fine!! (he)(he) just kidding, it was cut, I liked it. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Nice poem,but it would flow better with line breaks.For example: Once upon a time ther was a leprechan Who was looking for his gold He looked up and down the rainbows But all he found was mold ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I love leprechauns! And this poem!  ------------------ Denise |
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