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The Jackal Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 426Springfield, Massachusetts U.S.A |
i knew this could be the sign of things to come sometimes im not the only one feeling this way dying here soaking up fear tell me your life so i might hide you in what little light I can provide a sparkle cheap imitation for others salvation speak to me like you care as if im the only one you truly want here.. ------------------ |
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Saxoness
since 1999-07-18
Posts 1102Texas |
wow, very nice. Such a way with words, John. ------------------ "Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me." -Charles Brugnot |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Loved the line....'speak to me.....as if you care'.....well done! ------------------ Magic...the art of illusion....poetry....the art of the heart |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
As I have said before, you have a fine talent. This is just one example! ------------------ Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Liked this piece much Jackal! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extrordinaire! |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Your closing statements are always so well done...bringing everything together for a perfect weave. I like it! I like it! |
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