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optical pain |
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candace Junior Member
since 1999-09-05
Posts 14los angeles, california |
I have always wondered what my purpose is in life. But what I have learned is that it really isnt important. We live on this earth to hurt others and to be hurt by them. Many call this growing up. I call it misery. We are all sinners and know nothing about truth. What we know is always changing by the optical illusion of what we see. Never real. Never fake. For only the beholder of the view can make the judgement |
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INclan Senior Member
since 1999-07-20
Posts 1024Indiana, USA |
I disagree..... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I fail to agree your line of thought on this piece, I do not live to hurt and do not define myself by what others think....but, we are here not to judge peoples views but rather to read their poetry. This piece seems to flow well, I'm curious to see something else. [This message has been edited by hoot_owl_rn (edited 10-12-1999).] |
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