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jesus
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since 1999-09-15
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menasha, wi, usa

0 posted 1999-09-15 02:20 AM


legend says that long ago
all people had two heads
and four legs until the gods
threw down lighting bolts
splitting the people
they then had two legs and one head
only it left htem with half a soul
leaving them yearning for the other half
now we search our entire lives hoping
that one day to find the other half
i have stopped my searching
for i believe that the other half
of my soul lies deep within
the body of a beautiful woman
a woman with eyes of the gods
and the heart of a giant
never before have i felt
as whole a i do in her arms
i pray that the gods never again
decide to throw down their lighing bolts
because without her
i'd never be the same again
-jesus


© Copyright 1999 jesus - All Rights Reserved
juanita
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since 1999-08-13
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Los Angeles, CA, USA
1 posted 1999-09-15 05:31 AM


VERY ROMANTIC, JESUS.
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 1999-09-29 05:46 PM


This is quite lovely, and I like legend part of it.
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
3 posted 1999-09-29 10:10 PM


jesus I too like the legend..quite unique....thanks for the read

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

Mystic Essence
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since 1999-09-29
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4 posted 1999-09-29 10:32 PM


Deeply romantic....I enjoyed this very much.

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My tears are but a glimpse into the fiery tempest of my soul.~© Althea Willow, 1999~

jesus
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since 1999-09-15
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menasha, wi, usa
5 posted 1999-09-30 01:09 PM


i thank you all. romance today is lost and i
am lost in it.

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