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Eternal Peace |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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Oh please why won’t you let me go, I do not understand. What penance do I owe to you take back your wretched hand. Don’t touch me, don’t you look at me I will not go right now. I will live this life of mine. It’s mine! Your not allowed. I know you.. you have many names. Seen you in others eyes. For weeks, for months, for years sometimes before that person dies. I’ll not give up easily I’ll fight you to the end. I owe that much to Beth and Chris my husband and my friends. You feed on depressive silences knowing the weak will not call out. Others do not see the signs, but I will scream, you mustn’t doubt. I’ll admit that I am tempted to lay down and let you win. But I know enough of God to realize that’s a sin. Would I trade a moment’s peace for eternal pain in hell? YOU go to hell! It will not happen my soul is not for sale. I will let the tears flow down the pain will eat at me. But in the end, I’ll feel no hurt in God’s garden, eternally. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Lucie you inspire us all and humble me with your strength of purpose and compassion. I am glad you have chosen to fight and for reasons I have disclosed to you, I understand. I am here for you as always my friend.  ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Lucie, my heart goes out to you for whatever you are going through. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Truly heartfelt! Fight for all your worth....and your worth quite a lot! ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. [This message has been edited by Dragoness (edited 10-10-1999).] |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Wow Lucie, you write such poetry with a "punch" of late !! You go girl !!! With you always, Genny. ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
You tell 'em Lucie, and don't ever, ever, EVER give up... Hugs, ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." [This message has been edited by Elizabeth (edited 10-25-1999).] |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
A poem from the soul ! Very touching. I wish you strength to carry the burden and wisdom to keep you sane, and a lot of love to ease your pain. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
Perfection...in your writing, and your strength. Inspirational piece, here, Lucie. Thank you. I have reason to remember this and with your permission, I'd like to print a copy for my files. ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Lucie, definatley a poem from the soul, heartfelt, loved it ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You're a strong woman, Lucie... and these times you're going through may take every bit of strength you possess... that's when you lean on friends, borrow their strength... and keep fighting. Good luck, lady!! |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
So good Lucie...never give up !! Jenny |
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