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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA

0 posted 1999-10-10 02:42 AM


Moonlight Flames (Written in combination with Johnt300, my muse and my inspiration )

Whispers fall from wine tainted lips
Brushing across her lovers cheek like a soft breeze
He is reminded of dreams from years past
Caught between sleep and wakefulness,
He reaches to grasp the reality of her hair
Hoping to never lose sight of this most beautiful mirage
His hands touch smooth skin and passion awakens him
As the moonlight shadows bring the room to life
And soft light reflects off her skin
His lips trace a warm line over her body
Hands mapping uncharted territories for his mouth
Forcing soft moans from her passionate soul
Her starved body rises to meet his hungry lips
Quenching him with her loving warmth
They set the night afire with passions flames

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.

© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
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1 posted 1999-10-10 02:51 AM


Set the night afire.... great line! Lovely ....loved it!

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
2 posted 1999-10-10 03:00 AM


GAWD I love your collaborations!
Another winner!

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

3 posted 1999-10-10 03:43 AM


WOW Hoot and John, this is really beautiful, well written both of you !!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



Tara Simms
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since 1999-08-12
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Honea Path, SC USA
4 posted 1999-10-10 08:54 AM


Ruth and Tyson, this is wonderful! They set the night afire with passions flames --Wow!
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
5 posted 1999-10-10 09:04 AM


Wonderful! Especially like the title you chose for this piece.......

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-10-10 11:47 AM


Wow, thank you every one. 24 days now, but who's counting

Christopher, I think we do well together too, thanks

Peper, I have to give Tyson credit for the title, that was his brain storm...of course he had me for an inspiration

Tyson says thanks everyone, the Navy computer is being a bear and won't let him into passions right now...how dare it!!


Saxoness
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since 1999-07-18
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7 posted 1999-10-10 12:15 PM


Wow, this was wonderful!
I'm counting with you!

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot



Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
8 posted 1999-10-10 02:06 PM


Hoot,
Enjoyed the read. Well done.

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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9 posted 1999-10-10 02:27 PM


Exquisite! You two make a lovely team!

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Denise

RainbowGirl
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since 1999-07-31
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United Kingdom
10 posted 1999-10-20 09:19 AM


Only 14 days now..*g*

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
11 posted 1999-10-20 10:18 AM


Rainbow, thanks for digging this back up and yes, only 14 days, but who's counting
Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
12 posted 1999-10-20 10:49 AM


yep RG thanks, had missed it,

really beautiful hoot, you will have the good wishes of many for your trip

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