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When the Heavens Parted (A dedication)
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When the Heavens Parted (A dedication) |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
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When the Heavens Parted I would stare into the sky Searching for my inspiration. Eyes cast into the heavens Hoping for divine interpretation. My heart yearned to know the meaning, The beauty of true love My hopes: a whisper on the wind My prayers floated above. Then one day it happened An angel came into view. When the heavens parted It was then that I found you. *************************** I'm planning on making him a book for Christmas. It would have all the poetry that he's inpsired from me. This will be the dedication. |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Beautiful, Tara. And I'm sure he will love your book of poetry. Be sure to include the companion piece in Adult!  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Ditto, Tara! Very beautiful!  ------------------ Denise |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Most definitely, Ms. DeVine! This one is going to be the first one in the book. It's companion is going to be the last one. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
A man would be honored to receive it, Tara. Good work. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
what a very wonderful and special Christmas gift! this poem is lovely Tara....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Absolutely Splendid! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Thank you, Julie, Denise, Pepper. Balladeer, let's hope he feels the same way when he receives it. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I sent Tyson one the last week Tara, I told him it was the closest I could come to sending myself as my poetry is a part of me. This is lovely |
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Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Tara, this one is beautiful, I can see the star filled sky, I can see heaven parting, I can see God sending Your Love to you! Bravo again my dear friend...I am sure he will love this very special gift! ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Beautiful, Tara! |
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