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Kiss |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert 
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Did we ever kiss? In the merging moments we shared We came together Two souls, two hearts Sharing moments in time. We touched each other in the intimate ways that lovers do, Yet we never called it love. We caressed to quench the need The burning of two bodies Hungry for the warmth from one another Our tongues danced in passion. But did we ever kiss? The soft tender sharing The moist sweet breath That whispers words the mind cannot form I feel now in this moment This one meeting of two When we are not joining out of physical need When we cling to each other in the moonlight Holding tightly afraid to let go Needing more than skin against skin Breathing quickly, feverishly And my lips rise to meet yours Sweet breath, moist and tender Caressing my lips as yours dance A song as gentle as the starlight This moment we have finally shared A kiss. ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
This has a lot of emotion. You have expressed yourself quite well. There is indeed a difference between a kiss and a "kiss" with a meaning. Your poem says it all. Good work! ------------------ O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
WOW! WHAT A KISS! HUGGS!  |
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azblond Senior Member
since 1999-07-01
Posts 637The Steamy Desert |
Thank you for your replies...a kiss is the most intimate thing two people can share when it is given from the heart and not just the lips... ------------------ Let my words fall first upon deaf ears before a closed mind... |
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