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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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Listening Raindrops fall on an emotionally parched earth yet the suns brilliant rays evaporate their worth and such is the ending just as it began when one follows the cycle of the circle of man. Moonbeams flee from their source soon to be gone there isn't much time to dance on the lawn for when night becomes day the waltz isn't remembered and the fondest of dreams our minds have dismembered. So questing for substance with permanence not mentioned we must look deeper than mere consciousness intentioned this is initiated by defining the start listening to words spoken from a heart to a heart. RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
'listening to words spoken from a heart to a heart'. Very lovely. ------------------ Denise |
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Genea Member
since 1999-06-15
Posts 321USA |
i like the imagery you used......'an emotionally parched earth'. |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
Very nice, Robert. Words spoken from a heart to heart is very touching. Ohme |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
thank you very much guys....errr gals....err I mean guys????? ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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