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Open Poetry #3

Metamorphosis

Echo Rhayne
Senior Member

since 1999-09-17

Posts 1495
Canyon Country, CA

0 posted 1999-10-08 01:58 PM

In the passions of youth, the dragons are fierce
with many great things to pursue.
With deeds to be done and love to be won,
and preparing for what may ensue.

With the passing of time the passions subside,
and the dragons become less severe.
With love at one's side a peace grows inside,
and the best of one's life now is here.

In the twilight of life the dragons have died,
and the great deeds forgot or unclear.
But love still flows strong, and what may have gone wrong
is eclipsed by what we hold dear.

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~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

1 posted 1999-10-08 02:08 PM

I agree with you, Echo.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 1999-10-08 04:16 PM

I like this very much...

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

3 posted 1999-10-08 08:33 PM

Absolutely beautiful, Echo!

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Denise

caroline
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since 1999-08-16

Posts 1218
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4 posted 1999-10-08 08:51 PM

A first-class work, Echo

Very well done.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

5 posted 1999-10-08 10:41 PM

You hold me in Awe! Your talent is boundless. I loved this!

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

6 posted 1999-10-08 11:54 PM

Echo, you are quite the talented poet....I really enjoyed this

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

7 posted 1999-10-09 06:52 AM

Echo, this is one of your best! I like the use of the dragon in this one! For one so young, you are so wise!

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