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Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
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0 posted 1999-10-08 08:10 AM


Cool morning mist lay on the ground
Scattered patches of frost all around
Dawns first rays hitting the hill
Dispersing with it autumns chill

Clouds pure white lay in the skies
Seen by the deep and bluest eyes
Another day has yet to begin
Free in heart and soul from within

Choices made in the dark of night
Watch this Dragon soar to new heights
From strife and turmoil she does rise
Cheer and joy her only prize

Iridescent wings spread wide and true
Taking in each site as if it were new
Swirling and swoop with each gust of the wind
Her laughter has finally started to begin

It echo's in the valley
And none can compare
The joyous sounds
From up in the air

She's finally free to fly, as she will
Her wings no one on Earth can still
Only two know what happened in the night
Now it's her turn to help them learn flight


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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.



[This message has been edited by Dragoness (edited 10-09-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Dragoness - All Rights Reserved
Pufalove
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since 1999-08-18
Posts 119
Houston, Tx. USA
1 posted 1999-10-08 12:13 PM


This is lovely......has nice flow.......and has a lot of depth. Hats off!

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.


DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-10-08 12:39 PM


Teach them well sister of my heart.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©


hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
3 posted 1999-10-09 12:50 PM


Beautiful...everyone should know how to not only fly, but soar
JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
4 posted 1999-10-09 01:02 AM


Beautiful and vivid

Jenny

Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
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Purgatorial Incarceration
5 posted 1999-10-09 03:46 AM


Breathtaking ride sister, a beautiful journey through the eyes of your soul.


Had to come back and edit, since I can't tell you about your spelling and then spell something wrong!!!

[This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-09-1999).]

rascalx
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA
6 posted 1999-10-09 03:57 AM


A beautiful flight of fantasy as well as an inspiration to read..very well done
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
7 posted 1999-10-13 11:20 AM


Beautiful poem, Dragoness. I loved it.
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