Open Poetry #3 |
Dragon's Flight |
Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Cool morning mist lay on the ground Scattered patches of frost all around Dawns first rays hitting the hill Dispersing with it autumns chill Clouds pure white lay in the skies Seen by the deep and bluest eyes Another day has yet to begin Free in heart and soul from within Choices made in the dark of night Watch this Dragon soar to new heights From strife and turmoil she does rise Cheer and joy her only prize Iridescent wings spread wide and true Taking in each site as if it were new Swirling and swoop with each gust of the wind Her laughter has finally started to begin It echo's in the valley And none can compare The joyous sounds From up in the air She's finally free to fly, as she will Her wings no one on Earth can still Only two know what happened in the night Now it's her turn to help them learn flight ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. [This message has been edited by Dragoness (edited 10-09-1999).] |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
This is lovely......has nice flow.......and has a lot of depth. Hats off! ------------------ O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore. |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
Teach them well sister of my heart. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful...everyone should know how to not only fly, but soar |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Beautiful and vivid Jenny |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Breathtaking ride sister, a beautiful journey through the eyes of your soul. Had to come back and edit, since I can't tell you about your spelling and then spell something wrong!!! [This message has been edited by Christopher (edited 10-09-1999).] |
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rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
A beautiful flight of fantasy as well as an inspiration to read..very well done |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
Beautiful poem, Dragoness. I loved it. |
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