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Open Poetry #3

Decay

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

0 posted 1999-10-08 01:36 AM

Outside for the first time
In ever so long
My nostrils are greeted with
The familiar scent
Of simple decay
The car exhaust fumes
Rotten earth
Deterioration
Of the human spirit
I smile
I am home.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Isis
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-06

Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland

1 posted 1999-10-08 01:42 AM

You are a negative nelly tonight aren't you?

Nice job though.

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

2 posted 1999-10-08 12:55 PM

Not negative at all, I think. Those are the familiar smells of my home as well.

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

3 posted 1999-10-08 07:11 PM

Good job love.

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life is short kill quick

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