Open Poetry #3 |
Dear Lord |
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Dear Lord I can’t find the courage To tell him how I feel. You know how scared I am Saying it makes it real. If only he could read my heart And see what’s written there Then he’d know the love I hide. Lord, please hear my prayer. I feel so lost without him Please bring him back to me. I think we’d last forever. Is he my destiny? I want this so much Don’t let my heart break again. This is all I ask of you, In Jesus’ name, Amen. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tara....this is beautiful, tell him, make your prayers come true. Hugs Ruth |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely poem Tara...life is too short to let an opportunity slip by to find true love. And if he says no? Then move on....find happiness where you can.! |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Are you nuts?!? How can I tell him? Oh my God, my heart stops just thinking of it. My palms are sweating. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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DreamEvil Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 2396 |
God and I are not on the best of terms right now Tara, but I hope He hears your prayers. ------------------ Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~. DreamEvil© |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Lovely and sweet, Tara! ------------------ Denise |
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moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Well written Tara..I can imagine you getting nervous opening up your heart...How's bout forwarding this poem to him??..*grin*.. ((hugs)).. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Tara, Saying a prayer/poem like this is very powerful. Lovely. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
ACK! I did forward this poem to him, but I thought he'd be offline by now. I was counting on him not seeing this for a few weeks, until he gets settled into his new home. Oh, sheesh! While we were on the phone, he read it. He read all of your comments to me (including my own)! And I STILL DIDN'T SAY IT! ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
The Lord will hear your prayers and answer them. hope everything works out for the better. |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Tara You must put these feelings aside. Toerag is no good for you. |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Toerag?! EEEEEKKKKK! :-) ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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