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I'll cry, and cry, and cry,...
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I'll cry, and cry, and cry,... |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA 
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Tonight I'll cry, for the last time. Tears will pour, like a torrential rain. I'll cry till my tears, stop streaming, and my heart, erupts from the pain. I'll cry for the fruit that's forbidden. Cries that will echo, for all time. For my wishing to be with the one, that I know in my heart won't be mine. I'll give in, to the agony that adorns me, and to the misery, that consumes my soul. But after tonight, I'll no longer cry, I will be playing, a different role. My tears will be for my lover, my life, and for things, that I wanted to be. But most of all, for the belief that I had, that in time, he could learn to love me. My tears will be, behind me tomorrow. I won't speak, of my love again. Maybe, in the arms of another, I can bring, my heartaches to an end. I'll cry for the mistakes that I've made. I'll cry for the shame of me. But all of my tears can never erase, my love for a man, that's not free. So I'll cry, and cry, and cry, and cry, for how ever, long it may take. Then I'll dry my eyes, Lock up my heart, forever, for my own sake! |
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Morrigan New Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 5 |
Wow, have I been there a thousand times... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
The pain in this is intense. Very well written. ------------------ Denise |
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Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
I can feel your anguish in this. Excellent writing. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
This poem is pretty deep. I'm singing a Crystal Gail song for encouragement.. I'll get over you, I'll be through, and when I do, I'll be good as new, When I get over you.. The words may not be exactly right, but you get the drift, Huh?? ;-) Thanks all for your replys!! |
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poetFemmeFatale Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646Arkansas |
Hey Kitty, I see you're somewhat new, but I just wanted to say hey welcome...It's funny, I signed on to post something I just wrote, and I saw your title....mine is called " Cry & cry & cry "...written to my dad...I just thought that was kind of cool, since yours was still on the first page...guess we're having the same kind of day, huh? Glad to be able to see your poem and say HI !! Look forward to more of your work! You wanna share Kleenex? I'm almost out - - (sigh) ------------------ I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
Hey poetFemmeFatale : Thanks for the welcome. I've been around for a few months..posted here and there. What is it with all the tears here?? Maybe the name should be "the crying cavern" LOL..Every visit here brings on the tears for me. ;-) I'm out of kleenex my dear, but I'll gladly share the tolite tissue with you. See ya here. |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Firstly I'd like to say welcome too!!  A sad sad poem my friend. But don't lock up your heart forever, you may miss Mr.Right. ------------------ How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool? ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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miriam Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 323glendale,ca. |
kitty...I'm going through the same pain right now. Believe it or not tears are rolling down my face right now. I'm supposed to see him today for the last time. What am I to do?? The pain does go away though kitty. I wrote two poems regarding this. someone replied to me and told me that there is someone out there who is perfect for the other. Hang in there, keep your head high and remember that you're worth much more. Now...if only I could take my own advice I wouldn't be hurting so much. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Kitty dear, I have been there before and can really feel your pain...it is very well expressed. Now here's a Kleenex for you... ------------------ *Elizabeth* "Dwelt a maid belov'd and cherish'd by high and low, But with autumn leaf she perish'd, long time ago..." "Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near..." |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
wonderfully expressed pain in this one...but do not close your heart, it's hard to open it once you have |
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