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Devil in the Raw
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Devil in the Raw |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Not a real life story... Devil in the Raw Shaming heavens abroad Your essence is a fraud. Callous accusations Sends multiplying sensations. Uncurable endeavors Fellowship severs. Possessions your gratuity, Confusion guarantees annuity. Consequesnces of dishonorable nature Co-facilitates consummation of procedure. Fawning to savor your audience; Narcissistic conscience, of desirous negation, tripling-double jeopardy; Seeking the soul that will be your property. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
I know this Devil...good work! Jenny |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
WOW......Julie this is very good.....like the theme and the title really draws one in....... ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Thank you Jennylee and Pepper. I really appreciate you words.  ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Julie, Enjoyed the read. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very well done, Julie! ------------------ Denise |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Thanks Denise and Seymour...glad you enjoyed it. ------------------ Julie ------------------------- Thou who has given so much to me, give one thing more: a grateful heart. >George Herbert |
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