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Unchanged Love |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA 
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Sometimes it seems that we forget our loved ones need to hear how much we truly love them and how much we truly care For as we grow older time begins a race and somehow we get caught up in it's rathered hurry pace Days, months, even years slip by without so much as "hello" or "good-bye" But within our hearts strong feelings remain though no words have been spoken our love is unchanged. ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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Dragoness Senior Member
since 1999-08-07
Posts 513 |
Well done,and well said!  ------------------ Set you heart free and your mind will follow. |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
another " well said" ....enjoyed the read Echo ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 10-07-1999).] |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Great poem.....people who have been together for a while tend to take their lover for granted, but they love them all the same. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
beautiful |
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Kitty** Member
since 1999-07-27
Posts 428Charlottesville,VA USA |
I really liked this...So very true! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Echo! ------------------ Denise |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Melanie you do have such a way with words. I really enjoy reading your works. They are always touching. Keep em coming k?  |
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Isis Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296Sunny Queensland |
Lovely sentiments Echo, If we all told people we loved them and appreciated them more often, I think the world would be better for it. Thanks for a beautiful reminder ------------------ Cast your eyes on the ocean, Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away... ~Isis~ (Daughter of Mystery) |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
Rebecca...Diggin up old poems again? LoL Glad you liked it! I'll try to keep em coming. Isis...Thanks for reading and responding! Glad you liked it, and yes I think you are right, it would all be a little better! ------------------ ~*~ Time erases and rewrites all the lines. What remains is the poetry! ~*~ |
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