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HM3 Member
since 1999-07-15
Posts 169TX |
Growing pains Broken chains A sad melody Falling tears Listening ears A friend just for me Reaching out Sharing doubt When life gets me down Hands to clutch Gentle touch Can turn me around Spoken words Softly heard Cognitivity Holding tight Loving light Calm serenity ------------------ Work like money doesn't matter, love like you've never been hurt, dance like nobody's watching... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Simple. Beautiful. Simply beautiful!  ------------------ Denise |
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Jessey New Member
since 1999-10-06
Posts 3Oklahoma City, OK, USA |
This is a great poem... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh, this is beautiful....I love the format you selected for this piece |
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Ohme Senior Member
since 1999-07-17
Posts 816Texas |
HM3, this was too beautiful to let it go away. I brought it back so I could enjoy it again. |
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Watcher666 Senior Member
since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606 |
Beautiful! Well done!  ------------------ Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
I like the simplicity of this one, well done |
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