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Jessey
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0 posted 1999-10-06 10:23 PM


When you go home
He won't be there...

Alone

To an empty house
With an empty heart...

Be content

With the lingering scent of cologne
on his favorite sweater

And never let him go...

© Copyright 1999 Jessey - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-10-06 10:57 PM


This is so true! Sad and touching. Welcome to the family!

Denise
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2 posted 1999-10-06 11:00 PM


Sadly touching.

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Denise

Alwye
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In the space between moments
3 posted 1999-10-07 09:11 PM


Short, sad, and a moving piece. Bravo and welcome!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller



Isis
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4 posted 1999-10-08 01:41 AM


Short but it spoke volumes. Welcome to Passions too!

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How long after you are gone will ripples remain as evidence that you were cast into the pool?
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



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