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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

0 posted 1999-10-06 09:34 PM


Everyone feels,
a little frustration,
and know that stress,
leads to incarceration.

Ask Justin Thyme,
or query poor Andrew Scott.
Justin Kase too,
we've all felt it a lot!

What I'm saying here,
is meant to thank all of you,
for being my friends,
that night I felt really, messed up in my head and needed a sounding board which just happens to be Passions In Poetry and thank you very much because it helped a lot to read your humourous replies, blue.

© Copyright 1999 C.G. Ward - All Rights Reserved
Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley
1 posted 1999-10-06 09:39 PM


Love that last line! Will be humming that tune for some time! LOL (smile!)
caroline
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since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218
http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm
2 posted 1999-10-06 09:45 PM


Good one, there, Christopher! (again!)
There's no place like home when your home happens to be here at Passions

Great last line...heheheh.

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"Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats

Dragoness
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since 1999-08-07
Posts 513

3 posted 1999-10-07 04:00 AM


Great poem Chris! You found a place to call home,where there is someone to talk to all night long if you need to.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.


Iloveit
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since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121
NM
4 posted 1999-10-07 02:38 PM


yep, read your other poem, and was scared off, lol, not really, but this one is nice, to know you have your friends and you are doing better....and yep, that last line is killer
freespiritfem
Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49
Cordova,Alabama,USA
5 posted 1999-10-07 03:17 PM


i kow how you feel...this is the firt time i've been here and posted...but i've been comming in and reading everyones work...this is my new found home.....smile

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Paula Diane S.

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

6 posted 1999-10-07 08:07 PM


Great spelling of humourous there, Chris - hahah!! Conversion looms.....
My dear, I'm glad you have this place to come home to.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
7 posted 1999-10-30 01:24 AM


Great one Chris! It's great to have this place isn't it? I guess so, after all that was what you stated. hehe
Isis
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since 1999-09-06
Posts 6296
Sunny Queensland
8 posted 1999-10-30 01:33 AM


Great poem Chris, and that is why we are all here to share poetry and friendships. There'll always be someone online to listen and sympatesize here in Passions

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Cast your eyes on the ocean,
Every man goes down to his death bearing in his hands only that which he has given away...
~Isis~
(Daughter of Mystery)



Watcher666
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since 1999-10-13
Posts 1606

9 posted 1999-10-30 09:24 AM


Still enjoy this!!!! Well done little Brother!

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Illusion...what we see and what we do...it's all up to you.

RainbowGirl
Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023
United Kingdom
10 posted 1999-10-30 12:25 PM


Chris: It makes a big difference doesn't it my friend..

HUSG

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Skyfyre
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since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap
11 posted 1999-10-30 06:31 PM


LOL -- you have more friends than you know -- and in the strangest places too!

--Kess

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You cannot choose the way of your death, but the path you choose will determine its own end.


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