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Richard 33
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since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa

0 posted 1999-10-06 01:56 PM


Just between you, and I, once a love we
could never deny.

A love so sweet, and true, it could only be
meant for me, and you.

Neither distance, time, or space could
erase from my mind, the look of your
smile, or your beautiful face.

Remember whispers in the middle of the
night, nights I held you so tight, all the
love we shared, it just felt so right.

I wish I could see you, be with you, feel
your soft skin touching mine, to have
you lips pressed against mine, would be
so great, and feel so fine.

Without any doubt someone else you
have found, in a sea of tears, I am left to
drown.

Dear one, I still love you, This feeling I
can't stop, I can't rid my soul of you,
no matter how hard I try.

Although, I set you free, this is something
I want to say between you, and me.

© Copyright 1999 Richard 33 - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-10-06 07:08 PM


Richard, this is very very warm...what a lucky lady to have you pouring out your thoughts to her like this....I was offline about the same time you were for 10 days....technical difficulties after moving...I had a major withdrawal fit !! (sigh) Much better now except just overwhelmed at how much I missed, and now have so much to catch up on !! I'll be in touch, ok?

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I beckon you to come...I lure you with my tongue... - poet FemmeFatale



Richard 33
Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
2 posted 1999-10-07 12:06 PM


AH!! very happy to hear from ya............
Yeah my hard drive didn't just crash,it got
cook, toasted, burned, destroyed, need I
say more. I had to drive 40 miles to find
a decent used hard drive, fortunately I
found one cheap, and it's twice the size
of the old one. Yep walking tall!!!!!!
Thanks for the kind words, your the
greatest, please keep in touch.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 1999-10-07 12:09 PM


Very romantic and full of love!
Richard 33
Member
since 1999-09-09
Posts 187
glen easton, wv usa
4 posted 1999-10-07 12:38 PM


Full of love indeed, I wrote this poem in
1992 when my first wife, and I were in
the process of getting a divorce, there is
a part of you they get, that is never returned to you. They keep it, and use it against you!!!!!

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