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Done and undone
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Done and undone Our life is like some spiders bed Each day we thread another thread And the ebb and flow takes its toll With a laugh and tear from our soul. The sun and the stars and the moon From these things we are not immune, We draw from them our stimulus And pour from them our omnibus. The web dissolves thread by thread And the ebb carries away the dead There is no stasis we can obtain Nor a continuances of ordain. In this process we live and die And fuse again with earth and sky. We meet the need of cede too seed, With only wonder of the deed. I understand my time and place And do not fear the short embrace. There is but one regret for me, I will not see our legatee. |
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Echo Rhayne Senior Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 1495Canyon Country, CA |
This is great! I like it very much. Good job! ------------------ ~*~ I write to know I am alive ~*~ |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
very interesting piece Sy.....thought provoking for sure.....enjoyed the read ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Echo & Pepper, Enjoyed your comments thanks for the read |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
I like this type thinking put in verse. Thanks for sharing!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Excellent, Seymour! ------------------ Denise |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sand & Denice, Your comments always bring a smile. Thank you |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
A very deep thought poem...which intrigues me...I like the ones that make me think and ponder! Powerful words!:* |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
LIke the way you play with words, Seymour. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Wonderful commentary. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Romantic & Severn, Thank you for the read, commments and the boost. *L* |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...and life goes on - and on - and on - Nice job, Sy...  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, So nice to have your comment. Ms Nightengale. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
And so it goes... but you said it all so well. I'll admit to having looked up "legatee." Thought it might be what it was, but just wasn't sure until I read it on the Web... Webster's Dictionary that is. Again, nice work... and thanks for sharing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Scot, Legatee, not exactly a poetic word but it worked. Thanks for the read and comment. |
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