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Lucie
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0 posted 1999-10-05 12:12 PM


Place your hands upon mine,
palm to palm and tip to tip.
Press your face up to mine,
nose to nose and lip to lip.
Press your body close to mine,
chest to chest and hip to hip.
Two hearts as one so sublime,
together journey through life’s trip.

Lets converge our agonies
heart to heart and soul to soul.
Lets combine our memories,
dream to dream and goal to goal.
Lets blend our energies
push to push and pull to pull.
Two hearts, one destiny
half to half and whole to whole.

You are the mirrored soul to me
you my moon and I your sun.
Two hearts, two souls, two beings
through love are joined as one.


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Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul.

© Copyright 1999 Lucille Dobbins - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 1999-10-05 12:18 PM


This is fantastic. It likes me a whole bunch! Well done, Lucie!
Lucie
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2 posted 1999-10-05 12:23 PM


Thanks for the reply!
Sally S.
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3 posted 1999-10-05 12:24 PM


this one simply brings a smile. Nice, Lucie.
Lucie
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4 posted 1999-10-05 12:29 PM



Iloveit
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5 posted 1999-10-05 12:47 PM


lucie this is beautiful, the perfect description of soul mates....
Pepper
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6 posted 1999-10-05 12:57 PM


excellent Lucie......enjoyed this much

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May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams

RainbowGirl
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7 posted 1999-10-05 12:57 PM


Lucie: Smiles here as well..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.


Lucie
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8 posted 1999-10-05 01:07 PM


Thank you all for your replies..
A Romantic Heart
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9 posted 1999-10-06 06:20 AM


I LOVEed this one Lucie!
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 1999-10-06 09:39 AM


Beautiful!!
Dolphins3
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11 posted 1999-10-06 10:19 AM


A perfect decription of soulmates. I loved it. )
LngJhnAg
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12 posted 1999-10-06 11:14 AM


Lucie

This poem has a great style - I loved the way you perfectly blended the form throughout the poem. You are really quite incredible - yanno that?

Pufalove
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since 1999-08-18
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13 posted 1999-10-06 05:28 PM


What a wonderful play with words. This would make a great song. It would be a best hit, just like this poem is!

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O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore.


Andrew Scott
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14 posted 1999-10-06 06:20 PM


Most Excellent Lady Lucie! Really liked the flow... kind of joyously skipping along. Also liked how everything matched up perfectly... don't think it could have been done better. Top shelf material for me!
Lucie
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15 posted 1999-10-07 01:20 AM


Thank you all for your replies.. this poem likes me alot too..
Severn
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16 posted 1999-10-07 01:25 AM


Oh wow - love this. Close to home, it really is.
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