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You To Me ~And~ Me To You
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You To Me ~And~ Me To You |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston 
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Place your hands upon mine, palm to palm and tip to tip. Press your face up to mine, nose to nose and lip to lip. Press your body close to mine, chest to chest and hip to hip. Two hearts as one so sublime, together journey through life’s trip. Lets converge our agonies heart to heart and soul to soul. Lets combine our memories, dream to dream and goal to goal. Lets blend our energies push to push and pull to pull. Two hearts, one destiny half to half and whole to whole. You are the mirrored soul to me you my moon and I your sun. Two hearts, two souls, two beings through love are joined as one. ------------------ Not all poems I write are about me personally, yet they do come from MY soul. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is fantastic. It likes me a whole bunch! Well done, Lucie! |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Thanks for the reply! |
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Sally S. Senior Member
since 1999-06-07
Posts 847Ohio |
this one simply brings a smile.  Nice, Lucie. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
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Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
lucie this is beautiful, the perfect description of soul mates.... |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
excellent Lucie......enjoyed this much ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Lucie: Smiles here as well.. HUGS ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Thank you all for your replies.. |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I LOVEed this one Lucie! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Beautiful!! |
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Dolphins3 Member
since 1999-09-30
Posts 135Wisconsin |
A perfect decription of soulmates. I loved it.  ) |
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LngJhnAg Member Elite
since 1999-07-23
Posts 3508Boot+Kitty=Poetry in motion |
Lucie This poem has a great style - I loved the way you perfectly blended the form throughout the poem. You are really quite incredible - yanno that? |
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Pufalove Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 119Houston, Tx. USA |
What a wonderful play with words. This would make a great song. It would be a best hit, just like this poem is! ------------------ O all ye powers that he implanted, Arise, keep silence no more; put forth the strength that he hath granted, your noblest work is to adore. |
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Andrew Scott Member Elite
since 1999-06-24
Posts 2558Redlands,CA,USA |
Most Excellent Lady Lucie! Really liked the flow... kind of joyously skipping along. Also liked how everything matched up perfectly... don't think it could have been done better. Top shelf material for me! |
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Lucie Senior Member
since 1999-06-20
Posts 1077Houston |
Thank you all for your replies.. this poem likes me alot too.. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh wow - love this. Close to home, it really is. |
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