»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #3
»
Sad Awakening
| Open Poetry #3 |
|
Sad Awakening |
|
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA 
|
Sad Awakening My dream- To languish in your arms And feel the sunlight pouring in As I revel in the afterglow Of our loving. To gaze into your liquid eyes And feel our souls embrace. Safe and secure in your hold. Such a heady feeling, Lying here with you. Oblivious to my surroundings. Sighing softly I reach for you Only to discover I was only dreaming. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
||
| © Copyright 1999 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful and sad. Very well done! ------------------ Denise |
||
|
Michael
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well done, Tara, Soft and sweet. ------------------ Michael Anderson When God puts a tear in your eye, He puts a rainbow in your heart. |
||
|
hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Tara.....I love this one, it speaks softly to me but yet it's voice of love is strong. Nice to see another bitten  |
||
|
startin_fresh Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 137US |
Very well done my friend. But dreams have a way of repeating themselves. SF ------------------ Courage is the price that life exacts for granting peace with yourself. --Amelia Earhart |
||
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
denise, "beautiful and sad" that's how it feels on my end too. Michael, thank you. Hoot, once bitten, twice shy. Isn't that how the saying goes? S_F, is that a good thing or a bad thing? the dream is good, it's just the waking up that is difficult. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
||
|
Julie Jordan Scott Member
since 1999-09-19
Posts 146Bakersfield, CA USA |
Tara..... The fulfillment of your dream will come to be, of that I am more certain than almost anything. Your poem was wistful, loving, and full of the afterglow and promise of something magical that has happened in your life, and that still WILL happen in your life! All of us here are privileged to be alongside you as this happens! ------------------ Julie Jordan Scott is a Freelance Writer and Public Speaker, but her favorite role is that of Mommy! Visit her website at http://www.5passions.com |
||
|
moonmoon Member
since 1999-08-13
Posts 277TX , USA |
Beautiful indeed Tara...such a gentle portrayal of bitter-sweet rapture...Could very well relate.. Thanks for sharing it.. |
||
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Julie and Moonmoon, my dear friends! You have no idea what you are in for over the next few months. I am smitten. ------------------ It matters not how strait the gate; How charged with punishments the scroll; I am the master of my fate: I am the captain of my soul. --W.E. Henley Visit my poetry website: www.geocities.com/Paris/Musee/9954/ |
||
|
Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
glad to hear we are in for somemore of these wonderful writings Tara.......this piece is quite beautiful ------------------ May your days be filled with lots of sunshine and your nights lit up by golden moonbeams |
||
|
Iloveit Senior Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 1121NM |
this is beautiful, loved it |
||
|
freespiritfem Junior Member
since 1999-10-07
Posts 49Cordova,Alabama,USA |
Tara...very nice and heartfelt.. Remember...dreams do come true! Huggs!!! ------------------ Paula Diane S. |
||
|
Tara Simms Senior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 1244Honea Path, SC USA |
Pepper, Lovey, freespiritfem, thank you. Dreams are a beautiful thing, sometimes they keep us going. |
||
|
rascalx Senior Member
since 1999-08-25
Posts 590Florence, SC, USA |
very beautiful Tara..the sadness in your words is so vivid but so is the longing in your dream. |
||
|
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ouch |
||
|
Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
