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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL 
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October Feelings If I could take all the emotions held in my heart and give them all the same name it would have to be…. October RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
AMEN!! ------------------ Denise |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nice ------------------ Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore. |
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Julie Senior Member
since 1999-08-20
Posts 739Houston, TX |
Robert, I like your style. Your are able to say so much with such few words...me, well I have to go on and on....and still not sure if I got my thought across. Do you understand? Are you getting this?... "Just kidding". Nice job.  |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
My sentiments exactly!!! Great as always!!! Jenny |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
I understand perfectly Julie!! I just always said it short and sweet. I wish I had the patience to do a looooonnnngggggg poem!! RB ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I'm enjoying your work, Robert! This is lovely ------------------ "Tread softly, for I have spread my dreams under your feet"~~William Butler Yeats |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
I have to apologize to you. I have been lax in reading and commenting on your work. I want to do so much and have so little time...LOL. I will echo the sediments of the others. Short and sweet but saying much. If you want a challenge....Try one of Nan's work shops. I am enjoying it very much. The challenge is great and I am learning so very much. [This message has been edited by Marilyn (edited 10-04-1999).] |
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IsabelleSkye Member
since 1999-06-27
Posts 253 |
Robert...... October is my favourite month! How well you expressed how I feel inside sometimes. And how this glorious month feels too! I think I will have to delve into the archives a bit and see what other gems you have in store for me! I.Skye |
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Systematic Decay Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1301That place with padded walls and funny people in white......... |
Very interesting poem. I like. ------------------ "Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage." -Billy Corgan- |
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