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DreamEvil
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since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

0 posted 1999-10-04 04:12 PM

Pray you suffer not the death of love.
"I love you no more" are words you should fear.
I hope it is a thing you learn not of.
Your heart breaks again with each unshed tear.

"I love you no more" are words you should fear.
Words sink in your soul and tear it apart.
Your heart breaks again with each unshed tear.
Love should be avoided right from the start.

Words sink in your soul and tear it apart.
Your soul embraces winter's bitter cold.
Love should be avoided right from the start.
Love is the cruelest of lies, truth be told.

Your soul embraces winter's bitter cold.
Lock away your heart to avoid love's spell.
Love is the cruelest of lies, truth be told.
The death of love is a true living Hell.

Lock away your heart to avoid love's spell.
Words of romance are ashes on the tongue.
The death of love is a true living Hell.
If you must, suffer love while you are young.

Words of romance are ashes on the tongue.
I hope it is a thing you learn not of.
If you must, suffer love while you are young.
Pray you suffer not the death of love.

©1999 DreamEvil

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Skyfyre
Senior Member

since 1999-08-15

Posts 1906
Sitting in Michael's Lap

1 posted 1999-10-04 05:31 PM

This is a pain like no other ... and your verse has done it justice.

Pray these words never haunt your heart again.

Nocht

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"Nunc lento sonitu dicunt, morierus"
(Now as I hear this bell tolling softly for another, it says to me, "Thou must die.")

Systematic Decay
Senior Member

since 1999-09-15

Posts 1301
That place with padded walls and funny people in white.........

2 posted 1999-10-04 05:41 PM

Wonderful poem, Dream.

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"Despite all my rage, I am still just a rat in a cage."
-Billy Corgan-

Dragoness
Senior Member

since 1999-08-07

Posts 513

3 posted 1999-10-05 10:12 AM

Been there.......feeling this one deeply.

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Set you heart free and your mind will follow.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 1999-10-07 05:15 PM

Ah DE, indeed you look into the soul of my loved one, and suffer for her, as do I.

You have read my diatribe on her situation - it has worsened, and she has indeed, suffered the death of love.

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

5 posted 1999-10-07 07:43 PM

I've also suffered this many times. That's why I don't believe in love anymore. You've done a good job on this one..lots of emotion within the form... I like that.

Severn
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-17

Posts 7704

6 posted 1999-10-07 07:56 PM

You know, Dream - there's a simple phrase I've adopted:
'Love like you've never been hurt before'
Keep that heart of yours open, my friend. Liked your work of course.

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...he knows the needs of my passions, he sates the searching of my soul...

Andrew Scott
Member Elite

since 1999-06-24

Posts 2558
Redlands,CA,USA

7 posted 1999-10-07 08:08 PM

Truly suffered it only once... second time around I managed to keep it.

I will say this... you've got real emotion poured into this one, that's not to say your other offerings are lacking in such, because they never do... I guess what I'm saying is that I can really feel the pain in this one and I'm sorry you've been made to suffer so. All the same, thanks for sharing your talent... I bow to you and yours.

DreamEvil
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 2396

8 posted 1999-10-07 08:21 PM

This reposting suited the mood of several of those I hold dear. I believe it well explains it's particular pain.

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Now and forever my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©

Justbleu
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since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

9 posted 2003-11-14 12:39 PM

That is one of the worst pains in the world.....
I always liked your writing!!!!
Hope all is well with you!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

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