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Moonshine
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since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

0 posted 1999-10-04 04:58 AM

You bring to me
An internal calm
And you warm my soul
When I am wrapped tight in your arms
The sweet smell of your hair
And the touch of your velvet skin
So warm and so soft.......
You touch me so deep within
The touch of your perfect lips
Upon my quivering own
Feels like Heaven on Earth
A whole new world to me you've shown.

hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius

since 1999-07-05

Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA

1 posted 1999-10-04 08:38 AM

Beautifully romantic.....welcome to Passions, looking forward to more

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

2 posted 1999-10-04 10:22 AM

Moonshine, WOW! This is truly beautiful and romantic. I loved it

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 1999-10-04 11:49 AM

Very soothing with expectations.

Denise

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

4 posted 1999-10-04 07:25 PM

Quite lovely!

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Denise

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

5 posted 1999-10-04 09:00 PM

Ah, so very romantic, moonshine! Welcome to the Passions Family!!!

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*Krista Knutson*

Wise is he who faces the frailty of man with the strength of an understanding heart. -- Daniel L. Miller

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

6 posted 1999-10-04 09:02 PM

Quite beutiful, vey rarely do I use such a word but heck I liked your poem keep posting im hoping for more from you.

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life is short kill quick

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

7 posted 1999-10-04 09:19 PM

Thanx Hoot_owl,

My poetry is all about getting my feelings out and lol I have a lot of feelings ( as does everyone) therefore I have lots of poems. I am looking forward to posting more.

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

8 posted 1999-10-04 09:21 PM

DarkAngel,

I am glad that you liked the poem. It is a special one to me. Thanx for your support.

suicidal dreams
Member

since 1999-09-28

Posts 343
Toledo Ohio USA

9 posted 1999-10-04 09:21 PM

Im glad youll be posting more

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life is short kill quick

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

10 posted 1999-10-04 09:24 PM

Dear Sunshine,

Thanx for your comments - can you expand on the expectations comment more?

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

11 posted 1999-10-04 09:29 PM

Dear dsnyder,

Thanx for your comments and encouragement.

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

12 posted 1999-10-04 09:31 PM

Dear Alwye,

THanx for your lovely comments and the wonderful warm welcome : )

Moonshine
Member

since 1999-10-01

Posts 265
Australia

13 posted 1999-10-04 09:34 PM

Dear Suicidal Dreams,

Thanx for your lovely comments! I will be posting more of my work soon I think.

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