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Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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0 posted 1999-10-04 02:59 AM


(for Chris)

You think
I wouldn't esteem you?
Two weeks
and I would run?
To where?
With what?
I couldn't walk
a step away
you're holding half
of me
(the better half)
in your heart
My legs would
flop, my arms flail
and I'd turn
and walk right back
against my will
or not!
I couldn't leave
the sum of my soul
fear not
for a star
that can't move
without the pull
of gravity
you are
the force of me
my dove
rolling eyes or not!!!!

KM

© Copyright 1999 Kamla Mahony - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration
1 posted 1999-10-04 03:22 AM


Can a guy help it if he's a bit nervous???
And what makes you think that I'd let you leave anyway???hmmm?
LOL, this is too cute love!

Michael
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2 posted 1999-10-04 03:24 AM


Severn,
Beautiful poem. I believe in little things like forever and trust. Chris, tell her you love her already, would ya! wishing you two every happiness.

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Michael Anderson

The coldest lies are often told in silence.



Severn
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3 posted 1999-10-04 03:25 AM


I would have to say, on recent evidence, that YOU are too cute....
Christopher
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4 posted 1999-10-04 03:50 AM


<-----blushing!
And Michael, thank you, I have, and mean it, though the words seem so inadequate.

Severn
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since 1999-07-17
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5 posted 1999-10-04 04:00 AM


Michael - thanks!!! Wishing you and your love every happiness too, you know.
hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
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Glen Hope, PA USA
6 posted 1999-10-04 08:41 AM


Beautiful one Severn, I really like the message behind this one. I'm cheering you two on you know...oh, and I have seen that evidence and yes, he is too cute...LOL, I'd snag that one up real quick were I you

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Man can not discover new oceans unless he has the courage to lose sight of the shore.

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